I believe children should not be allowed to play with balloons at all. Here are my reasons.
Firstly, balloons can be frightening to kids because if they kicked them, it would pop and make a loud noise. This is with all colours of balloons including brown, black, and green. I believe children should never play with balloons.
Secondly, another example is if kids are at birthday parties with lots of balloons and they are messing around inside, one could pop one and scare the whole party heaps.
I believe children should not be allowed to play with balloons for a lot of reasons.
I really like the approach you have taken to this week’s prompts, Jake. Instead of telling a story you have discussed the subject of the safety of balloons for use by children. You have set your arguments out very clearly. Your use of paragraphs makes it easy to follow the points you are making, especially the way you start the paragraphs with ‘Firstly’ and ‘Secondly’. I think you are right too! Balloons can be very frightening indeed.