The Mob

BANG! We went inside and realised It was coming from the upstairs at the highest floor. “Lets see whats happening!” I yelled as we ran up there in fear but when we got up there before we got a glimpse of it, we both fainted. We woke up in shock as we were chained to the wall while watching her create the mob. We were so afraid but we didn’t say a word or she might have realised we were awake. All of a sudden she looked at us and released the mob right at us. we screamed in fear and all of a sudden, everything went black.

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  1. Hi Jake it was a really good story and made jump you had a lot of description bit the second sentace went for a little bit to long and also forgot a capital letter but over al great story.

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